"Woah you give me a
cold shoulder"
should be:
"Though you give a
cold shoulder"
The rest reads fine,
although I thought the
band was "Bob Glitter
and the
Glitterhouse Five"?
And chance you remember the
lyrics to the end song? I
can not recall the first
[ Find more Lyrics on http://mp3lyrics.org/U5QK ]line and its driving me nuts"
(A beggar) is sorrow,
The devil is hate.
A dream is tomorrow,
A fool can not wait.
An artist is beauty that rises above,
and looks in the eyes of an angel.
An angel is love...!
Why...! Why do I love you,
I love you, I do.
Why...? It's because my angel is you.
I know, yes, I know.
I know.
(repeat first part much faster)
END